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with revised terms that are fairly 
standard. 
As I mentioned, the document as 
presented had a lot of defects (in 
addition to it being a rather 
lackluster offer). I know you all 
chatted about moving forward 
quickly, but we all need to 
collectively address the terms in 
more detail. The provision regarding 
back end is so off base, I suggest we 
address the other issues like price 
and term first. 
Also please note that 
needs to 
reserve quite a few rights so she can 
proceed with her intended business 
goals of a podcast, Ted Talk, 
speaking engagements, and 
unscripted projects. 
Most importantly, if a creative work 
based on her book (only) is to be 
made, she needs creative input and 
approval so her life and those of her 
family are not distorted for the sake 
of the project.. 
Since you do not seem to be well 
versed in this area, you may want to 
consider engaging an attorney to 
assist on your end. This agreement 
should not have been fast tracked in 
this way, it is not fair to 
as I'm 
sure you understand now. 
Reserving all rights. 
Kathy M. Lombard, Esq. 
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